Rosa's Verse Kitchen

I could only assume what you intend to convey, but certain words - I am always sucked into whirlpools by certain words - like 'split', 'gray','duality' - such words transform me- and I start to brood... Basically a solitary person,I have experienced certain heightened mental state in my solitude...
Your poem kind of inspired me to write one myself... its been a long time since i wrote the last...
Its there in my blog. "The Bamboo Grove".

Your poem is disturbing...

I'm a solitary person myself and i love it. As for this poem, I write only what my inspiration prompts me to write. I cannot write at a whim like everyone. I write only when the muse touches me. Its a curse, really. I wish I could write whenever i wanted bcoz i have so many ideas in my head. As for what it means, well... i cannot express it any better in prose. This poem is the best i can do to express what i felt at the time of writing. It is what it is.

didn't understand anything :-( but, I remember Gracy teacher from highschool mentioning that some animals have Grayscale vision :-(

couldn't follow u completlely but enjoyed it,nevertheless.could feel,sense, the words breaking free-out of u & falling,heavy,light,hard,soft-onto the page.

@ tedy: its about separation of a whole.Together, there's spark,differences, colors. But separated-only a vaccum and the vision, just grey! Hope u got something :-)
On a scientific note- doesn't all animals have grayscale vision?

@ chinny:words did break out. sometimes rushing, sometimes lightly gliding!

hey hi!
amazingly good poems. I'm awestruck.
pls pls if u have written some short stories too, wud luv to read them all.
bye for now!
vikas